Poem. Grammar and sentence structure

Please help me correct the grammar and sentence structure in the following poem I wrote:

The Celestial Bird

Ever since she cracked open her eggshell

All the winged beauty ever wanted to do was fly,

She loved the sky’s colorful enchantment

mostly, the starry night sky which aided her with contentment,

Staring at it while listening to the wind sough

made her ask if life existed in those glimmering objects,

"Is there any world outside this grime earth?"

She spent thinking about this question as long as she thought about the auroras in the north,

"How many birds might be out there that I have never seen?"

This one did not just take away her time but also the serene,

"What would that make my existence in this world worth?"

She felt like she was emotionally strangling herself,

Before she knew she was falling

plummeting from a great height,

She couldn’t discern if it was physical

or she was drowning into her own thoughts,

This dilemma kept her wings at rest

causing her to hit the ground,

It was no dream where she could wake up

rather it was her final moment before letting her soul fly away.

Thank you for helping!