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Navy grape 169 Posted 8 years ago
Poem: Future Star
I wanna be a star
So I can go much far
Will get new friends
Like asteroids and comets
I'll not come back
Because feelings are in lack
Everyone is busy on earth
Man to man has no worth
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You have tried too hard to make rhymes, so the rest of the structuring is mangled.
- You have tried too hard to make rhymes, so the rest of the structuring is mangled.
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You have tried too hard to make rhymes, so the rest of the structuring is mangled.
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