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Kedra Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Poem for congratulation
Hi All,
I need to congratulate my partners from abroad with their company 20th anniversary. Since they have the celebration contest, I came up with a poem which I hope will help me to stand out
. I need someone's opinions on the correctness of the words, sense, and how it sounds in general. Or it's better to quit this idea... and write a few words in prose rather than sound unnatural.. Thank you in advance for your input!
What’s the top must-see in Holland?
Tulips, clogs or coffee shop?
Windmills, cheese or Red Light district…
Or a night life that’s nonstop?
Not a chance. You don’t know Holland,
If you have not heard this name:
Starts with “F, a clear slogan,
They’ve just rocketed to fame!
COMPANY is turning twenty!!!
Let us wish you all the best!
More achievements and in plenty
May your company be blessed!
I need to congratulate my partners from abroad with their company 20th anniversary. Since they have the celebration contest, I came up with a poem which I hope will help me to stand out
. I need someone's opinions on the correctness of the words, sense, and how it sounds in general. Or it's better to quit this idea... and write a few words in prose rather than sound unnatural.. Thank you in advance for your input!What’s the top must-see in Holland?
Tulips, clogs or coffee shop?
Windmills, cheese or Red Light district…
Or a night life that’s nonstop?
Not a chance. You don’t know Holland,
If you have not heard this name:
Starts with “F, a clear slogan,
They’ve just rocketed to fame!
COMPANY is turning twenty!!!
Let us wish you all the best!
More achievements and in plenty
May your company be blessed!
Top answer
Hopefully, other opinions will be posted here. I may just not be good with poetry, but I do like the third stanza. I would precede it with “Your” and not capitalize COMPANY.
- Hopefully, other opinions will be posted here.
- I may just not be good with poetry, but I do like the third stanza.
- I would precede it with “Your” and not capitalize COMPANY.
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Hopefully, other opinions will be posted here. I may just not be good with poetry, but I do like the third stanza. I would precede it with “Your” and not capitalize COMPANY.
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