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Dapp93 Posted 19 years ago

Poem about a piano

0Some time ago, I wrote a poem about a piano, as I have an extreme devotion to pianos in every way (about the way it sounds, its physical beauty, etc.). Please, tell me what you think about it. Also, consider this is maybe the first poem I've written in english, and I do not know much about measuring verses and paragraphs, rhyme, and other stuff related to poetry writing...02br
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01i00A piano made of wood02i02br
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01i00And some other things too02i02br
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01i00No owner it has 02i02br
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01i00No playing it does.*02i02br
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01i00Its pedals reach the floor02i02br
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01i00There's no need for more02i02br
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01i00The bench is put in front02i02br
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01i00For someone to go and sit on02i02br
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01i00The piano was out of tune02i02br
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01i00No one fixed it, later nor soon02i02br
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01i00No one has come and played02i02br
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01i00Silently has this instrument stayed02i02br
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01i00The sound it had once02i02br
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01i00Much more beautiful was02i02br
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01i00The keys were not something to be seeing02i02br
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01i00It was just matter of using some feeling02i02br
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01i00If this piano had a life02i02br
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01i00It would be in no strife02i02br
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01i00It would want its keys touched02i02br
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01i00It would like those fingers really much02i02br
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01i00If this piano gets destroyed02i02br
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01i00No one will be annoyed02i02br
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01i00No one will remember, at last,02i02br
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01i00How beautiful this piano was02i02br
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hello, im a kid who's looking for poems about pianos. i play the piano too but im not that good im only a begginner i need a person to teach me but i have lessons at school but thats not enough sorry getting out of subject i like your poem very much keep up the good work sir.

  • hello, im a kid who's looking for poems about pianos.
  • i play the piano too but im not that good im only a begginner i need a person to teach me but i have lessons at school but thats not enough sorry getting out of subject i like your poem very much keep up the good work sir.
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hello, im a kid who's looking for poems about pianos.
i play the piano too but im not that good im only a begginner i need a person to teach me but i have lessons at school but thats not enough sorry getting out of subject i like your poem very much keep up the good work sir.
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slowly the piano played its song

with its black coat on

alone in the dark

lonely with out a friend

his only friend was the memories

that past by whenever he remembered

his friends who played along
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I agree that this poem is very good! Thank you very much for making it upEmotion: stick out tongue

I am looking for a poem about piano te
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Dear Dapp93 and Dear Anonymous,
I think it's great that you post poems to this forum and hope that we'll see more in the future.
Anonymous, may I suggest that you register and become a member? It's free and without obligation, and you will have the opportunity to send Private Messages and post you contact details on your profile.
Best regards,
JohnParis
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Shakespeare wrote a famous poem about piano playing, his sonnet no. 128:

How oft when thou, my music, music play'st
upon that blessed wood whose motion sounds
with thy sweet fingers, when thou gently sway'st,
the wiry concord that mine ear confounds,
do I envy those jacks that nimble leap
to kiss the tender inward of thy hand,
whilst my poor lips which should that
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AnonymousShakespeare wrote a famous poem about piano playing
Not exactly. The piano wasn't invented until quite a long time after Shakespeare died. It must have been some other keyboard instrument, one of the forerunners of the piano.

CJ
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I really love it it relates to my life well! you are a great writer!Emotion: embarrassed
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Hello, I think is beautiful, keep the good work...!

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