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Graceupongrace Posted 7 years ago

Poem

Walking

Slowly

A Movement

A Stirring in the Brush

Stop

Listen

A Flash of Gold

Growling

Suspense

Wait

He Jumps

A Lion

Pounces

Out Of The Brush

Attaches

Shaking

Cracking

Arm Is Broken

Guns

Not Dead Yet

Pounces

Falls

A Bullet To The Head

The Men Escape

Alive

Injured

They Survived


Is this poem ok? Do you have any suggestions?

  

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It's fine, except did you mean to write "attaches", not "attacks"?

  • It's fine, except did you mean to write "attaches", not "attacks"?
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It's fine, except did you mean to write "attaches", not "attacks"?

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