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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago

Poem

Could you please check my poem?
Hope

Hope, we’ve all got hope
Not knowing big or small
Not knowing the colour of hope
Hope is in the heart of all

Hope is the ability
To live with courage and confidence
Hope is the sureity
To lead life in radiance

Hope is the dream of success
Always make us keep going
Provides us with happiness
Gives strengths to keep moving

Hope says future starts now
And try to plan and strive
It doesn’t matter how
It’s time to prove

Hope is beautiful
May fade but never dies
Hope always fruitful
Hope never lies

Hope gives us inspirations
That makes life worth living
Hope shows determination
That keeps your believing

Hope is the dream of expectation
Always gives us self confidence
Even when we are down
Hope allows us to cope

When future seems dark and dull
And there’s no aim
Try to have some hope
To clear all your mope

Hope is the wishing from heart
For something to happen
We should always keep the faith
To make our dream to come true

Hope is the ability to think
Of the successful future
Help us keep striving to succeed
The best in future

Hope is the dream of tomorrow
It helps us to remain positive
Even obstacles we encounter
We never quit to hope

Hope always overcomes the challenges
It builds up burning inspiration
To achieve out dream and
To meet expectations
  

Top answer

You need to punctuate your poetic sentences just like you would punctuate prose. I am not going to do that for you; I will just fix some grammar. Hope Hope, we’ve all got hope Not knowing big or small Not knowing the colour of hope Hope is in the heart of all Hope is the ability To live with courage and confidence Hope is the surety To lead life in radiance Hope is the dream of success Always makes us keep going Provides us with happiness Gives strength to keep moving Hope says the future starts now And tries to plan and strive It doesn’t matter how It’s time to prove Hope is beautiful May fade but never dies Hope is always fruitful Hope never lies Hope gives us inspiration That makes life worth living Hope shows determination That keeps us believing Hope is the dream of expectation Always gives us self confidence Even when we are down Hope allows us to cope When the future seems dark and dull And there’s no aim Try to have some hope And not to mope Hope is the wishing from heart For something to happen We should always keep the faith To make our dreams to come true Hope is the ability to think Of the successful future Helps us keep striving to succeed The best in the future Hope is the dream of tomorrow It helps us to remain positive Even obstacles we encounter We never quit hoping Hope always overcomes the challenges It builds up burning inspiration To achieve our dreams and To meet expectations Stylistically, your poem is too long and repetitive.

  • You need to punctuate your poetic sentences just like you would punctuate prose.
  • I am not going to do that for you; I will just fix some grammar.
  • Hope Hope, we’ve all got hope Not knowing big or small Not knowing the colour of hope Hope is in the heart of all Hope is the ability To live with courage and confidence Hope is the surety To lead life in radiance Hope is the dream of success Always makes us keep going Provides us with happiness Gives strength to keep moving Hope says the future starts now And tries to plan and strive It doesn’t matter how It’s time to prove Hope is beautiful May fade but never dies Hope is always fruitful Hope never lies Hope gives us inspiration That makes life worth living Hope shows determination That keeps us believing Hope is the dream of expectation Always gives us self confidence Even when we are down Hope allows us to cope When the future seems dark and dull And there’s no aim Try to have some hope And not to mope Hope is the wishing from heart For something to happen We should always keep the faith To make our dreams to come true Hope is the ability to think Of the successful future Helps us keep striving to succeed The best in the future Hope is the dream of tomorrow It helps us to remain positive Even obstacles we encounter We never quit hoping Hope always overcomes the challenges It builds up burning inspiration To achieve our dreams and To meet expectations Stylistically, your poem is too long and repetitive.
  • You should eliminate about half of it.
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You need to punctuate your poetic sentences just like you would punctuate prose. I am not going to do that for you; I will just fix some grammar.

Hope

Hope, we’ve all got hope
Not knowing big or small
Not knowing the colour of hope
Hope is in the heart of all

Hope is the ability
To live with courage and confid

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