Plzzzzz help me correct my Motivation letter for an Airline Co

Hello,

I have written draft copy of my motivation letter to be sent to an Airline company for placement in training program. I need to send it on 30 January 2006. So, plz provide me with your suggestions and correct my draft copy.

Thanks in advance

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I am writing to apply for TF Training program for placement in Manufacturing division.

At present, I am working in ABC as interne for the fulfillment of degree of MSc. in ‘Quality Technology and Management’. I have completed my bachelors in Metallurgical Engineering. After that, I have had a range of employment and experience in engineering industry, but my interest has always been to combine my technical knowledge with the management skills. As I believe in the present competitive environment it is essential to have best of both the worlds. My long terms goals are to pursue a challenging management career, which offers diverse job responsibilities in a global work environment. In the era of globalization organizations have no boundaries and they have to compete globally for their survival and sky is the limit, therefore working in international environment is crucial for my career growth. Therefore, to share international experience within a team, and to be able to develop and gain valuable knowledge are my primary reasons for pursuing the TF training. Your training course will provide me with the platform where I can practice twin skills of engineering and management

I feel I have a range of relevant skills and knowledge that I can bring to you compnay. I have a double qualification of Engineering and Management coupled with three year of working experience in a multi cultural environment I believe I will be flying with high colors in the TF Program. My interpersonal skills have greatly developed both during my work experience at ABC where I am working with the Swedish and French teams and with Japanese in XYZ. During my current studies I have not only written Project reports but also frequently presented them in front of students. Most of the courses involve small group of students from different countries, working as a team to co-search and co-present a topic. This taught me a lot about working in a multi cultural environment teams and also practices my presentation skills. I believe I have presented to a high standard and have learnt many of the principals behind effective presentations.

Thank you very much for considering my application. I hope that you find my resume of interest, and I look forward to the possibility of a personal interview.

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