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In this research, a new CCHP cogeneration system with the primary actuator of a molten carbonate fuel cell is evaluated. Figure (1) shows the block flow diagram presented in this study. In the first scenario, a power generated by the molten carbonate fuel cell reaches the consumer, in which case the molten carbonate fuel cell releases some hydrogen. This excess hydrogen produced is used to launch the polymer fuel cell in scenario two. A single-effect absorption chiller is used in the system to use the wasted heat of the molten carbonate fuel cell, in which 11% of the wasted heat enters the absorption chiller to produce cold, and the remaining heat enters the building applications to supply hot water. Also, in case of emergency, the heat generated by the polymer fuel cell can be used in the circuit, and superfluous hydrogen is stored in the tank after launching the polymer fuel cell. In the third scenario, the required hydrogen of the polymer fuel cell is purchased and the excess hydrogen of the molten carbonate is not recovered and used. In all three scenarios, the analysis of energy, exergy, and economic are fully evaluated. Due to the unavailability of real data on system component failure times, the risk analysis and system reliability have been analyzed in three modes of poor performance, average, and good for each component of the hybrid system. By analyzing risk and reliability, it can be shown that repairs are not considered as a cost, on the contrary, with the aim of investing and managing physical resources. In this new analysis, the reliability of each component starts from 1, which is a state where the device is completely pristine and tends to zero, which is the probability that each component is healthy. It is expected that by the end of the life of each component of, molten carbonate the fuel cell, polymer, an absorption chiller, if operating under normal operating hours, will be damaged at least 10, 7, and 8 times, respectively. Also, the best payback period was calculated by taking the inflation rate into account of 3.3 years.

Teechr · Accepted Answer

thisisElinaIn the first scenario, a power generated by the molten carbonate fuel cell reaches the consumer,

"a power" is wrong. Either write "the power" or just "power". Also, why is "reaches the consumer" important?

thisisElina~~to produce cold~~ where it has a cooling effect

thisisElinabuilding applications

What do you mean by that?

thisisElinathe hydrogen required ~~hydrogen of~~ in/for the polymer fuel cell is purchased and the excess hydrogen of from the molten carbonate is not recovered ~~and~~ or used.

By "is purchased", do you mean "must be supplied/added"?

thisisElinaIn all three scenarios, the ~~analysis of~~ energy, exergy, and economic analyses are fully evaluated.

thisisElinahave been analyzed in three modes: of poor ~~performance,~~ average, and good performance for each component of the hybrid system.

thisisElinait can be shown that repairs are not considered as a cost, ~~on the contrary, with the aim of~~ but as investing into and managing physical resources.

thisisElinaand tends to zero, which is the probability that each component is healthy.

I don't understand that. How can 0 be healthy if 1 is good?

thisisElinaIt is expected that by the end of the life of each component of molten carbonate the fuel cell, polymer, an absorption chiller, if operating under normal operating hours,

Rewrite that in a direct and simple manner and with as few commas as possible.

will be damaged at least 10, 7, and 8 times, respectively. Also, the best payback period was calculated by taking the inflation rate into account of 3.3 years.

I don't understand the underlined part.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

You need to separate the text into paragraphs.

thisisElina CCHP cogeneration system

thisisElinacarbonate fuel cell is evaluated

Spell out acronyms the first time you use them. What is CCHP? The present perfect tense should be used, rather than present, since you are reporting past results.

thisisElinaIn the first scenario

Also how many scenarios are there? Mention the number before saying "The first scenario..."
A scenario describes one typical application or installation of the device.

thisisElinaa power

Power is non-count.

thisisElinaA single-effect absorption chiller

"single-effect" doesn't seem right.

thisisElina is used in the system to use the wasted heat

Repetitive. It sounds like the heat is not wasted, it is employed.

thisisElinato produce cold

Cold water? Cold air? Or chilled water?

thisisElina enters the building applications

What is a building application? People submit building applications to the authorities when they require permission to build.

thisisElina launching the polymer fuel cell.

Do you send it into outer space on a rocket?

thisisElinathe analysis of energy, exergy, and economic are

Analysis are? Subject/ verb disagreement.

Economic is an adjective. It is misused.

thisisElina in three modes of poor performance, average, and good

Not good. I believe you meant this.

in three modes of performance (poor, average, and good)

thisisElinaon the contrary, with the aim of investing and managing physical resources.

That does not make sense.

thisisElina the reliability of each component starts from 1, which is a state where the device is completely pristine and tends to zero, which is the probability that each component is healthy.

You need to express this more clearly. Is there a scale ranging from 0-1, that represents the likelihood of system failure?

thisisElina It is expected that by the end of the life of each component of, molten carbonate the fuel cell, polymer, an absorption chiller, if operating under normal operating hours, will be damaged at least 10, 7, and 8 times, respectively.

They are damaged more than 8 times an hour during normal operations? You need to write this better.

thisisElinathe inflation rate into account of 3.3 years.

Do you mean the average inflation rate over the past three years and four months? We are in a every low inflationary environment.

Plzz give me a hand :( is it grammatically correct?

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