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Why People Go Abroad

Pakistan's employment policy is a fact and reason that why people go abroad. A person who

Spend 20 to 25 years of his life for get the education in Pakistan and afterwards when he want

to enter in practical life then there is no any chance for him to get the good job. Many educated

people absolute move to abroad due to unemployment.

Until there are many chances available here in Pakistan but people get hopeless that time, when they

finished their last study period here and when they don't get the positive response about job in their

first practical year of life, they become more hopeless and try to move abroad. The Unemployment

of Pakistan is a big reason for why people go abroad.

And the Second reason of this is, that people who are more educated and who get the job here but

this job is not deserving of their capability of study, so they don't feel satisfaction.

Some people's job could not complete their home or financial needs even that that people are more

educated. This reason also disappoint the people's feeling and they try to plan for move

abroad because according to that people they haven't save their future here. And this is also fact that

after passing a huge part of their life when they see that their future is not secure here in Pakistan

they will absolutely move their life towards the abroad.

Sunny_adam · Accepted Answer

Why People Go Abroad

Pakistan's employment policy is a fact and a reason ~~that~~ why people go abroad. A person who

Spends 20 to 25 years of his life ~~for get the~~ getting an education in Pakistan. Afterwards when he wants

to enter into practical life ~~then~~, there is no any chance for him to get ~~the~~ a good job. Many educated

people ~~absolute~~ move to abroad due to Pakistan's unemployment.

Until there are ~~many~~ more chances available here in Pakistan ~~but people get hopeless that time~~ people will continue to lose hope. when they

have finished their last study period here and when they don't get the positive response about a job in their

first practical year of life, they become more ~~hopeless~~ disheartened and try to move abroad. The Unemployment

of Pakistan is a big reason for why people go abroad.

And the Second reason of for this is that people who are more educated and who get the jobs here, but

this job is not deserving of their capabilities ~~of study~~, so they don't feel satisfied.

Some people's job could not complete their home or financial needs ~~even that~~ that even though these people are more

educated. This reason also disappoints ~~the~~ people'~~s feeling~~ and they try to plan ~~for~~ to move

abroad because according to that people they haven't save their future here. And this is also fact that

after passing a huge part of their life when they see that their future is not secure here in Pakistan

they will absolutely move their life towards ~~the~~ living abroad.

Nibl · Answer

oh thanx mr. sunny_adam i m very thankful to u dear, because no any body was told me about this thanx for correction.

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