Hello, someone I know wrote this letter of invitation. I would like someone to suggest corrections. I have capitalised the words and phrases which I find funny, awkwardly placed or unnecessary [plz check if they are so]
Dear Sir, It's out great pleasure to INFORM you that the institute of ***, a widely known and REPUTED institute with state-of-the art technology, running successfully all over India in different centres.[This is an incomplete sentence.]It's a proffessional, value based educational SYSTEM on 'accounts', payroll, taxation, online ffinalisation etc. THROUGH COMPUTER. It's different in THE way because of the innovative programmes latest versions in accounting and the academic excellence. Moreover it's commited to THE man-making effort through institunal learning
For your kind information, its Delhi CENTRE [ I think 'branch' would be a better word]is going to have a seminar on *** at *** at ***. You are cordially invited to attend the seminar and be a participant on the SAID MOVE.
Faithfuly Yours
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