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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Plz review my recommendation letter for a student

To Whom It May Concern:
I am very pleased to recommend XX. XX is active in various class activities; She works very well with others probably because she is a sincere and honest person. She is enthusiastic and hard working and is very much respected by the faculty and students alike. She is a mature person who takes her responsibilities seriously. XX is one of the top students in my class. She received the highest grade in the class during the fall semester; one of the highest grades I have ever awarded.
XX has also spent considerable time outside the class working as part-time professor assistance for me; she was very helpful and well organized in various tasks.
To conclude, I would like to restate my strong recommendation for XX. If you have any further questions regarding XX`s ability or this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me using the information on this letterhead.

Sincerely,
XX
  

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This is almost perfect and is much like previous letters of recommendation I have received myself. Here are a couple of minor suggestions: Anonymous To Whom It May Concern: I am very pleased to recommend XX. XX is active in various class activities.

  • This is almost perfect and is much like previous letters of recommendation I have received myself.
  • Here are a couple of minor suggestions: Anonymous To Whom It May Concern: I am very pleased to recommend XX.
  • XX is active in various class activities.
  • (A semi-colon is not needed here since the two ideas are not linked) She works very well with others probably (This indicates you are not sure whether she works well with others or not) because she is a sincere and honest person.
  • She is enthusiastic and hard working and is very much respected by the faculty and students alike.
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This is almost perfect and is much like previous letters of recommendation I have received myself. Here are a couple of minor suggestions:
AnonymousTo Whom It May Concern:

I am very pleased to recommend XX. XX is active in various class activities. (A semi-colon is not needed here since the two ideas are not linked) She works very well with others prob

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