Plz i'm preparing for my oral test,check my papers

0I'm first year university student and now i'm preparing for my English oral test. Could you check my paper for me? Thanks in advance02br
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001)about what you do in yr free time02br
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00Whenever I have free time, I love watching TV, surfing the internet and hanging out with my friends. 02br
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00-00 00As the TV now has a cable network, it provides us with a variety of programmes. “MTV”, “Cartoon network”, “HBO” and “CNN” are my favorite channels. I think watching TV is not only one way of relaxation but getting knowledge as well. I often listen carefully to the programme and take notes what I hear. By doing so, I can improve my English listening skill and my vocabulary along with having fun with my favorite programs.02br
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00-00 00Surfing the internet also gives me a lot of pleasure. I can widen my knowledge by reading an e-newspaper, searching for a field I care about while I listen to a song downloaded from the internet. I feel it makes the most of my free time.02br
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00-00 00As I am now getting busier and busier, I nearly don’t have time chatting with my friends so when I have free time I often hang out with them. We will sit in our favorite place, talk about what we’ve done, complain about what makes us not feel happy with, and even ask for advice on something. Then we’ll eat food we all like. After each gathering I always feel comfortable and ready for up-coming events. 00 02br
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002)about a typical day in yr life02br
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00My 24 hour day usually begins at 7 a.m. The first thing I do when I open my eyes is to turn on the TV to listen to “Xone FM” – my favorite music program, just to lighten up my day^^. Since my parents are busy with work, I am the person who often prepare breakfast for my family. After doing some chores I start my studying day. As a university student I prefer learning on computer. I usually read English e-newspapers for an hour then search for some documents I want to know about. For the rest of the morning I have to read books on certain subjects at school, such as math and economics because I have lessons in the afternoon. For lunch time, I often eat alone or sometimes with my father. I go to school by bus with a friend. On the way to school we mainly talk about our lessons. I make most of my time at school, interact with other students on my lessons, do some research or read documents. When I get home from the university, my evening is spent with my family. I help my mother in the kitchen. I must admit that I doing such work as it helps me learn how to prepare a good meal. After dinner time is studying time again. I find it more effective to study at home so I often do homework until late at night. Listening to a song I like before going to bed helps me relaxed. I often go to bed at 0 am or later. However, I always try to make everyday a difference to make it interesting.02br
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003)about the way you dress02br
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00 00Like many other girls I pay much attention to fashion. To me the way I dress is partly affected by 3 factors : music, film and my personality. I love rock and R’n’B music so I00 00choose sports clothes as my style. I often go to school wearing jeans with a T-shirt and sport shoes. I also prefer embroidered short-sleeved blouse and baggy pants. Wearing clothes that suits me makes me feel comfortable, confident and more dynamic. I can efficiently study and take part in school’s activities. 02br
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00-00 00Casual clothes, especially jeans and street or skate clothes are the best policy for outside school’s activities. I like baggy trousers and cartoon T-shirts along with a trucker hat. Unlike many girls I hate skirts so I don’t often have them in my wardrobe^^. Whenever I come across a new style I often mix my clothes to create new one that are suitable for me. Simplicty and convinience and fashion is the goal to help me choose clothes for outdoor activities.02br
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00-00 00However, on some special occasions I have to wear more formally so I select “ao dai”. I have my dress modernized, which makes it both traditional and fashionable. I feel very proud whenever I have it on.02br
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00I think the way you dress partly reflects what you are. So I always choose clothes that are both comfortable and suitable for me.02br
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