Plz help with my motivation letter

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00plz help me with correction my letter. It's my first experience in writting such letters. This letter is very important for me. I'll be very pleased if u help me.. thx u in advance..02br
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00In this letter I would like to explain my motivations for [name of program].02br
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00First of all, I would like to explain why it is so important for me to take part in this program. [name of company] gives unique opportunities to fulfill yourself. Since I would like to devote my life to international cargo transportation, I strongly believe that the [name of program] will help me with my further development. After graduating the University I will have a good theoretical base but no practical experience in this field. I think, if I want to build a successful career I have to get experience to study how to work; I need clearly understand what this kind of work requires of me. [name of program] gives you a chance to try yourself in four different departments, after finishing [name of program] I can easily choose the most suitable department for me to make a career in it. This is really great!02br
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00Although I do not have practical experience in this field, I feel that I can. I have been always looking for new challenges to improve my knowledge and skills. I would like to achieve something considerable in my life. After successful finishing [name of program] and expatriation I can come back for work at my domestic region to take one of the leading positions and it really attracts me. One of the components of the mission of the company is “we are keen on better understanding out clients and features of their business” and another aspect is “we offer unique transport solution”. Working here I could help people to solve their everyday tasks connected with transportation of the cargo, I can be a part of the system, which helps “to do people’s life easier”. This sounds wonderful!02br
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00 I finished school for children of high abilities; it was quite hard to study there because we had many lessons, we learned a lot of subjects, did much homework and went through difficult exams at the end of each term. The most important things that I have understood due to this school are how important to be able to work in team, how to work hard, how to focus and concentrate, and how to balance my time and priorities. I’m a broad-minded person and I always open to new ideas. I have always tried to develop such trait of character as winning personality in me, in addition I am a highly-motivated and ambitious person, and I like to accomplish tasks as thoroughly and effectively as possible. I hope that I will get the opportunity to prove my abilities in the program. 0-