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Jing Posted 18 years ago
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00 The words below is the brief introduction of our company. Would anyone like to help me to correct this with pure writting English? And please comment the correcting reason if possible so that I can understand the distance between my writting english and pure writting English, even if only difference of capital letters and lowercase letters. 02 br
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00 Fordeck Ltd. was established in 2005 by private investors as a professional supplier of boards to furniture manufacturers and decoration companies. We are locating in Foshan, Guangdong province, China and supplying local market and oversea market with high quality Melamine MDF, particle board and Slatwall since established. The Melamine Paper Factory, which with share from our company, ensures our products with any color according to requirement from customers. Our high quality, good reputation and competitive price have won many clients for us in USA, Europe and local market. 02 br
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00 We began to produce showcase and display fixtures since 2007. In order to increase the current market share and develop in this field, we recapitalized and established the new Fordeck Ltd. in January 2008, under cooperation with our business partner, Foshan Everlasing Enterprise Company. The new Fordeck Ltd. supplies mainly showcases, bookshelf, display fixtures to local market and oversea market. In the mean time, we still supply Slatwall, melamine MDF and particle board with stable quality and capacity. 0-
00 The words below is the brief introduction of our company. Would anyone like to help me to correct this with pure writting English? And please comment the correcting reason if possible so that I can understand the distance between my writting english and pure writting English, even if only difference of capital letters and lowercase letters. 02 br
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00 Fordeck Ltd. was established in 2005 by private investors as a professional supplier of boards to furniture manufacturers and decoration companies. We are locating in Foshan, Guangdong province, China and supplying local market and oversea market with high quality Melamine MDF, particle board and Slatwall since established. The Melamine Paper Factory, which with share from our company, ensures our products with any color according to requirement from customers. Our high quality, good reputation and competitive price have won many clients for us in USA, Europe and local market. 02 br
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00 We began to produce showcase and display fixtures since 2007. In order to increase the current market share and develop in this field, we recapitalized and established the new Fordeck Ltd. in January 2008, under cooperation with our business partner, Foshan Everlasing Enterprise Company. The new Fordeck Ltd. supplies mainly showcases, bookshelf, display fixtures to local market and oversea market. In the mean time, we still supply Slatwall, melamine MDF and particle board with stable quality and capacity. 0-
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0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Jing 12 cite 10 /* 12 br 10 The words below is the brief introduction of our company. Would anyone like to help me to correct this with pure writting English? 12 br 10 */ 12 br 12 br 10 Fordeck Ltd.
- 0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Jing 12 cite 10 /* 12 br 10 The words below is the brief introduction of our company.
- Would anyone like to help me to correct this with pure writting English?
- 12 br 10 */ 12 br 12 br 10 Fordeck Ltd.
- was established in 2005 by private investors as a professional supplier of boards to furniture manufacturers and decoration companies.
- We are 11 b 11 u 10 locating 12 u 12 b 11 font 11 b 10 located 12 b 10 12 font 10 in Foshan, Guangdong province, China and 11 u 10 supplying 12 u 10 11 font 11 b 10 supply 12 b 12 font 11 b 11 font 10 12 font 12 b 10 local 11 del 10 market 12 del 10 and oversea 11 font 11 b 10 markets 12 b 12 font 10 with high quality Melamine MDF, particle board and Slatwall 11 del 10 since established 12 del 10 .
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10 The words below is the brief introduction of our company. Would anyone like to help me to correct this with pure writting English? And please comment the correcting reason if possible so that I can understand the distance between my writting english and pure writting English, even if only differen
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1 i 00 Fordeck 01 b 00 Ltd 02 b 00 was established in 2005 by private investors as a professional supplier of boards to furniture manufacturers and decoration companies. We are 01 b 00 located 02 b 00 in Foshan, Guangdong province, China and 01 b 00 supply the local and overseas markets 02 b 00 with high quality Melamine MDF, particle board
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1 font 00 Both the 2 replies are very helpful for me. Thank you very much! 02 font 02 br
01 font 00 Mr. Wordy may be confused by the sentence "...which with share from our company...". I don't know if Feebs11 was also confused or not. The melamine paper factory is legally an independent joint venture. Fordeck Ltd shares the factory
01 font 00 Mr. Wordy may be confused by the sentence "...which with share from our company...". I don't know if Feebs11 was also confused or not. The melamine paper factory is legally an independent joint venture. Fordeck Ltd shares the factory
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0 01 font 00 Mr. Wordy may be confused by the sentence "...which with share from our company...". I don't know if Feebs11 was also confused or not. The melamine paper factory is legally an independent joint venture. Fordeck Ltd shares the factory with other 2 companies. It provies melamine paper to the 3 main users. If the sentence makes readers confused. How shall I w
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10 The words below is the brief introduction of our company. Would anyone like to help me to correct this with pure writting English? And please comment the correcting reason if possible so that I can understand the distance between my writting english and pure writting English, even if only differen
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