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Ghai_prince13 Posted 19 years ago
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011.3. Write a congratulatory card to the comrade.In occasion of its birthday(its mean greeting of the birthday)02br
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00Dear rinku ;02br
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00Many happy return of the day. May each moment of the special day be full of joy and cheer for you. May you stay happy all your life through. May you live long and a prorpicious life.all dream that you have dreamt, may come true. Best of luck for your future.02br
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0018.3 write a short report natural disaster and people behavior during this time.02br
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00Natural disaster are those disaster which occur do to uncertainly in nature. it probably produces fewer headline than wars, earthquake ,flood. since disaster are very powerful it cause a huge damage to our peaceful environment. There are many type of disaster these are as follows: tsunami, floods, volcanic eruption, etc. since, these disasters are not predicable, people get panic.02br
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001.3. Imagine, that you take part in the international conference where influence of youth music on style of a life of teenagers is discussed. Write the brief text of the performance02br
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00Music has a great influence on the people. It is mostly seen among the younger generation. The music is a many kinds so like pop, some like jazz while others move to the rock. The teen agers try to copy there favorite stars. The fashion. The trends all comes over from the music and music videos.02br
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00 00But some bad effects of music are that many singers take drugs, smoke, drink alcohol. These all effect the teenagers and spoil them. The teenagers copy there stars and thus move on with such things and ideas blindly. So it would be much better that people just listen to the music and stop copying the bad habits or doing of their favorite stars. 0-
  

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0Corrections in green, other errors for you to fix in yellow. Are these exercises from an English class? I'll help you a little bit but you need to hand in your own work really.

  • 0Corrections in green, other errors for you to fix in yellow.
  • Are these exercises from an English class?
  • I'll help you a little bit but you need to hand in your own work really.
  • Did you copy the questions carefully?
  • 02br 02br 00Many happy return00s 00of the day.
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0Corrections in green, other errors for you to fix in yellow. Are these exercises from an English class? I'll help you a little bit but you need to hand in your own work really. Did you copy the questions carefully? I'd be a bit worried if you have, as the questions themselves are full of errors.02br
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00Dear 00R00inku, (proper nouns such as names must start with a
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0Dear 00R00inku02br
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00Many happy return00s 00of the day. May each moment of 00this 00special day be full of joy and cheer for you. May you stay happy all your life through. May you live 00a00 long and 00prorpicious 00life.00I hope that all dreams00 that you have dreamt, 00will 00come true. Best of luck for your futu
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Patience, patience. People do have other things to do! And it would make life easier if you only posted one theme to each posting.

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