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00 As Turbo International Business students at the University of the Netherlands Antilles, we wondered if you/your company would be interested in financially helping s with our study trip to Los Angeles, USA. 02 br
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00 We are writing to you because your sponsorship could help us cover our travel expenses. We would be deeply grateful if you could sponsor us. You may consider it as an investment for the study of three very capable students with great potential. That in the near future could be strong pillars representing Curacao in the internationally. 02 br
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00 We would like to inform you that after graduating with a VWO-diploma, we passed our first and second year of International Business in one year, which is called propodeuthic year, with great results. Next schoolyear, 2005-2006, we will join the third year students of International Business and we hope we will finish it with the same success. 02 br
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00 The study trip will be very beneficial for us. We will have the chance to practice our English, learn more about another culture and get in contact with international businesses and their business ethics. It will be a great opportunity for us to prepare for our later stage program in the last year of International Business. 02 br
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00 During the study trip to Los Angeles we will have some cultural activities, we will be visiting some business and we will follow some classes a University which are relevant for our study of International Business. This year the second year students went to Atlanta and their study trip was a great success. Next year, January, will be our turn to go on a study trip. We are sure that our study trip will give the same results. 02 br
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00 Yours faithfully, 02 br
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00 Dear *** 02 br
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00 As Turbo International Business students at the University of the Netherlands Antilles, we wondered if you/your company would be interested in financially helping s with our study trip to Los Angeles, USA. 02 br
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00 We are writing to you because your sponsorship could help us cover our travel expenses. We would be deeply grateful if you could sponsor us. You may consider it as an investment for the study of three very capable students with great potential. That in the near future could be strong pillars representing Curacao in the internationally. 02 br
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00 We would like to inform you that after graduating with a VWO-diploma, we passed our first and second year of International Business in one year, which is called propodeuthic year, with great results. Next schoolyear, 2005-2006, we will join the third year students of International Business and we hope we will finish it with the same success. 02 br
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00 The study trip will be very beneficial for us. We will have the chance to practice our English, learn more about another culture and get in contact with international businesses and their business ethics. It will be a great opportunity for us to prepare for our later stage program in the last year of International Business. 02 br
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00 During the study trip to Los Angeles we will have some cultural activities, we will be visiting some business and we will follow some classes a University which are relevant for our study of International Business. This year the second year students went to Atlanta and their study trip was a great success. Next year, January, will be our turn to go on a study trip. We are sure that our study trip will give the same results. 02 br
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00 ………………. 02 br
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00 Yours faithfully, 02 br
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00 TINT students 02 br
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0 Date 02 br 02 br 00 *** 02 br 02 br 00 Dear *** 02 br 02 br 00 Like Turbo International Business students at the University of the Netherlands Antilles, we wonder if you/your company would be interested in financially helping us with our study trip to Los Angeles, USA (date, how long do you want to stay). 02 br 02 br 00 We are contacting you because your sponsorship could help us cover our travel expenses and we would be deeply grateful to you for it. You may consider it as an investment for the study of three very capable students with great potential, who in the near future could be strong pillars to represent Curacao at an international scale.
- 0 Date 02 br 02 br 00 *** 02 br 02 br 00 Dear *** 02 br 02 br 00 Like Turbo International Business students at the University of the Netherlands Antilles, we wonder if you/your company would be interested in financially helping us with our study trip to Los Angeles, USA (date, how long do you want to stay).
- 02 br 02 br 00 We are contacting you because your sponsorship could help us cover our travel expenses and we would be deeply grateful to you for it.
- You may consider it as an investment for the study of three very capable students with great potential, who in the near future could be strong pillars to represent Curacao at an international scale.
- 02 br 02 br 00 We would like to inform you that after graduating with a VWO-diploma (maybe explicit VWO), we passed our first and second year of International Business in one year, which is called propodeuthic year, with great results (you should state the grades achieved or diploma) .
- Next academic year, 2005-2006, we will join the third year students of International Business and we hope we will finish it with our same previous successes.
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0 Date 02 br
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00 *** 02 br
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00 Dear *** 02 br
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00 Like Turbo International Business students at the University of the Netherlands Antilles, we wonder if you/your company would be interested in financially helping us with our study trip to Los Angeles, USA (date, how long do you want to stay). 02 br
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00 Dear *** 02 br
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00 Like Turbo International Business students at the University of the Netherlands Antilles, we wonder if you/your company would be interested in financially helping us with our study trip to Los Angeles, USA (date, how long do you want to stay). 02 br
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00 We are Turbo International Business students at the University of the Netherlands Antilles, and we wondered if you or your company would be interested in helping us financially with our study trip to Los Angeles, USA. Your sponsorship would help us cover our travel expenses. 02 br
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00 We would be deeply grateful if you could consi
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00 We are Turbo International Business students at the University of the Netherlands Antilles, and we wondered if you or your company would be interested in helping us financially with our study trip to Los Angeles, USA. Your sponsorship would help us cover our travel expenses. 02 br
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