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Shammi Posted 21 years ago
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Mentally ill have been treated in various ways by society throughout the history. As we know everything is getting better and better as time is passing. As being uneducated, people had used very poor methods to cure mental illness. As in 10,000 BC boring holes in skull was used to get rid of the bad spirit as they believed in good and bad spirit.
  

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Throughout history the mentally ill have been treated in various ways by society. In the past people did not have the knowlege that we have now and so they used very poor methods to cure mental illness. In 10,000 bc they believed mental illness was the result of a bad spirit, so they would bore holes into the skull to release the spirit.

  • Throughout history the mentally ill have been treated in various ways by society.
  • In the past people did not have the knowlege that we have now and so they used very poor methods to cure mental illness.
  • In 10,000 bc they believed mental illness was the result of a bad spirit, so they would bore holes into the skull to release the spirit.
  • Treatment of the mentally ill is improving with the passing of time.
  • (The last sentence seems somewhat of a humorous understatement in light of the previous sentence, you would want to change it I reckon.
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Throughout history the mentally ill have been treated in various ways by society. In the past people did not have the knowlege that we have now and so they used very poor methods to cure mental illness. In 10,000 bc they believed mental illness was the result of a bad spirit, so they would bore holes into the skull to release the spirit.
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