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plz correct my story!!

0Dear sir 02br
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00Could you please check my story. some are mistake so please correct my letter 02br
00I had been accident this morning, the whole body wet because of the rain. When I went out to my house the weather was warm and I felt very cool, 00Suddenly, rained come down 00 00Immediately, I remember that I didn’t bring umbrella 00I get off the bus 00Even though I ran through the office, all my clothes are wet so dried and dried 00Looked like rat 02br
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00Thanks in advance 02br
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00salome0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 00I had an accident this morning. My wholle body was wet because of the rain. When I came out of my house, the weather was warm and I felt very comfortable.

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00I had an accident this morning.
  • My wholle body was wet because of the rain.
  • When I came out of my house, the weather was warm and I felt very comfortable.
  • Su00ddenly, rain came down 00 00Immediately, I remembered that I hadn't brought my umbrella.
  • 00I got off the bus.
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0Hi,02br
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00I had an accident this morning. My wholle body was wet because of the rain. When I came out of my house, the weather was warm and I felt very comfortable. Su00ddenly, rain came down 00 00Immediately, I remembered that I hadn't brought my umbrella. 00I got off the bus. 00Even though I ran to the office, all my clothes were wet, so I had to
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0 Dear Clive 02br
00thank you so much for helping me.02br
00*** bless02br
00salome 0-
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