0 Hi I'm new on this forum !! 02br 02br 00I've written my motivation letter for a one year stage in Brazil. Can someone correct my english and if necessary add some comments. 02br 02br 00Thanks from Switzerland 02br 02br 00-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 02br 02br 00Dear Sir, 02br 02br 00Following your annonce on the website (http://***) for the International Management Trainee, I would like to submit my canditature for this program. This program seems extremely interesting and I feel it would be a challenging experience within a dynamic and well-known international company. 02br 02br 00I am graduate at the Swiss Federal Institute of Technology Lausanne (EPFL - Switzerland) with a Master of Science in Mechanical Engineering. My background is very extended as I have taken some multidisciplinary courses in Microengineering and Material Science. 02br 02br 00Being a quick learner as well as having a strong interest in the areas of business and project management, which the CVRD's International Management Trainee can offer, it would be a unique international experience with continuous training. I am motivated, with interpersonal and analytical skills. 02br 02br 00Looking forward to hearing from you soon, I send you my best wishes. 02br 02br 02br 00Yours sincerely 0-
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