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Torrentmt Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Plz correct my motivation letter

0 Hi I'm new on this forum !! 02br
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00I've written my motivation letter for a one year stage in Brazil. Can someone correct my english and if necessary add some comments. 02br
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00Thanks from Switzerland 02br
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00Dear Sir, 02br
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00Following your annonce on the website (http://***) for the International Management Trainee, I would like to submit my canditature for this program. This program seems extremely interesting and I feel it would be a challenging experience within a dynamic and well-known international company. 02br
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00I am graduate at the Swiss Federal Institute of Technology Lausanne (EPFL - Switzerland) with a Master of Science in Mechanical Engineering. My background is very extended as I have taken some multidisciplinary courses in Microengineering and Material Science. 02br
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00Being a quick learner as well as having a strong interest in the areas of business and project management, which the CVRD's International Management Trainee can offer, it would be a unique international experience with continuous training. I am motivated, with interpersonal and analytical skills. 02br
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00Looking forward to hearing from you soon, I send you my best wishes. 02br
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00Yours sincerely 0-
  

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0 You need to look at 02br 02br 00annonce 02br 00canditature 02br 00am graduate 02br 00extended 0-

  • 0 You need to look at 02br 02br 00annonce 02br 00canditature 02br 00am graduate 02br 00extended 0-
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0 You need to look at 02br
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0 It's ok now with these modifications (located between the ***) ? 02br
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00Dear Sir, 02br
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00Following your *** on the website (http://***) for the International Management Trainee, I would like to submit my

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