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Cute572 Posted 18 years ago
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0 Today, in these natural colors, coming through the opened window, adjusted over the high blue wall; I feel much relaxed -- light as fur, dark clould of stress seems to be fading away.02br
00An egg shaped wooden silver-brown frame hanged by a thick brown thread over the nail, waged at upper right wall, quietly posturing the childhood golden days. 02br
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00Chek the puntuation as well as points the wrong ones and help me in grammar corrections! PLZZZZZZ0-
  

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12br 10An egg shaped wooden silver-brown frame hanged by a thick brown thread over the nail, waged at upper right wall, quietly posturing the childhood golden days. 12br 12br 10Chek the puntuation as well as points the wrong ones and help me in grammar corrections! 02br 02br 00An oval wooden frame, silver-brown in colour, hung by a thick brown thread from a nail in the upper corner of the right-hand wall, brought back childhood's golden days.

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  • 12br 10An egg shaped wooden silver-brown frame hanged by a thick brown thread over the nail, waged at upper right wall, quietly posturing the childhood golden days.
  • 12br 12br 10Chek the puntuation as well as points the wrong ones and help me in grammar corrections!
  • 02br 02br 00An oval wooden frame, silver-brown in colour, hung by a thick brown thread from a nail in the upper corner of the right-hand wall, brought back childhood's golden days.
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01cite10Cute57212cite10 Today, in these natural colors, coming through the opened window, adjusted over the high blue wall; I feel much relaxed -- light as fur, dark clould of stress seems to be fading away.12br
10An egg shaped wooden silver-brown frame hanged by a thick brown thread over the nail, waged at upper right wa
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00its ok i know my sentences need much attention. Much attention 05002br
00I want to know about my sencond sentence, what if i rephrase it like this:02br
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00An oval wooden frame, silver-brown in colour, hung by a thick nilon ribbon over the drilled nail, fixed strongly on my tall wall, postures my childhood light-hearted days
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0It's very wordy, but when you get to the "postures my childhood" it doesn't make sense. Does it remind you of your childhood? 0-
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0Too many adjectives are making it poor stylistically, we don't care what the ribbon is made of, that the nail was drilled, or that it hangs strongly, or that your wall is tall. 'posturing' is definitely wrong - what meaning are you trying to express?0-
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0Hello nona the brit 05002br
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00But its a decription sentence should we describe this deep every thing ?02br
00well i was trying to say that picture inside the fram remaind or show my childhood time. 010id1
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0What if i replace "Posturing" with "Capturing" or "Carring", would it points out what i want to say about the frame hung? 0-
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0Hanging on the right hand wall was a picture in a silvery brown oval frame. It showed [children playing on a beach/a happy group of children playing] and brought back childhood's golden days.0-
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0 Hanging on the right hand wall was a picture in a silvery brown oval frame. Carries my childhood worry-free days.02br
00Can i write like this because word "brought" make sentence past tense/0-
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01cite10Cute57212cite10 Hanging on the right hand wall was a picture in a silvery brown oval frame. 11font11b10Carries my childhood worry-free days. 10This is an incomplete sentence which does not relate to the preceding sentence. Why does this picture reflect your carefree childhood days? What i
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0Thanks Feebs! 05002br
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00I have few more sentences like this. Could you check whether they agree in subject-verb and tenses? 02br
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001. At top surface of the table, I see, a round vase holding [verb is appropriate?] the red roses with leaves, [comma we use?] and give [or use continous participal tense: giving?] an elegant look to my table.
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