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Hemantchavan Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Plz checking my sentence!!!

Dear XXX,


Thanks for your invitation card. Very Sorry, I am not coming to attend your marriage because I have not been checking my email for one month.


I came to Bangalore on last week from Pune and I am staying in Bangalore. I am looking for job.


Wish You A Happy Married!!!


Best Wishes,

XXX
  

Top answer

I think: Dear ***, (Many) thanks for your invitation. I'm very/really sorry that I did not go/come to your marriage (if it happened)/I can not go/come to your marriage because I have not checked my mailbox for one month. ( Another way you can use: "Apologizes for not going/coming to your marriage because ...

  • I think: Dear ***, (Many) thanks for your invitation.
  • I'm very/really sorry that I did not go/come to your marriage (if it happened)/I can not go/come to your marriage because I have not checked my mailbox for one month.
  • ( Another way you can use: "Apologizes for not going/coming to your marriage because ...
  • ") I went to Bangalore last week from Pune.
  • I'm staying Bangalore to look for a job.
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I think:

Dear ***,

(Many) thanks for your invitation. I'm very/really sorry that I did not go/come to your marriage (if it happened)/I can not go/come to your marriage because I have not checked my mailbox for one month. (Another way you can use: "Apologizes for not going/coming to your marriage because ... ")

I went to Bangal
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Please do checking my grammar!!!

Dear ***,
Hello! How are you? I am fine and hope the same from you. How are your parents? I am requesting you to please help me to get a job. My areas of interest include BPO Non, Data Entry Operator, Hardware, Networking. Do you have any reference in company? I am waiting for your reply.
Regards,
***

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