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Topic:

The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for the changes to school site in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons when relevant."

Write at least 150 words.

The given maps illustrate figure of a school in 2004 and the future plan.

As can be seen form the diagrams, the school will be mostly reconstructed at the middle to serve study purpose of students. Additionally, most of trees will be kept for creating fresh air.

In 2004, the school possessed two buildings located in the North West and the middle of this area. There was a large sports field at the north of the school. A road and car park were built in the western school. Next to the car park is main entrance to enter the building one. Besides, many trees were planted from the northeast to the southwest of the area.

In 2024, the sport field will be replaced by an additional building. The areas for sports will be moved a bit lower than the previous position. The middle of the school will witness an appearance of a new road. A second car park will be erected in the northeast of the school. Meanwhile, almost all the trees will not be removed to keep fresh environment.