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Mahiti Posted 19 years ago
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Plz, check my short text and correct mistakes :)
I don't know english very well, so i'll be thankful if someone could check this invitation and correct mistakes.
If i put this topic in wrong place - sorry
It's my text:
"We want to invite you for an evening of sensual attractions, where all your senses will be delighting in pleasure. If you only want to spend time in this nice way with someone who loves you, just come to our place of heavenly joy on Saturday.
Unforgettable sensations guaranteed! We are going to make you blissfully happy and fulfil all of your whims and whishes
R.S.V.P.*
*Give us all the details about hour of your coming and your expectation (we will try to not dissapoint you)"
If i put this topic in wrong place - sorry
It's my text:
"We want to invite you for an evening of sensual attractions, where all your senses will be delighting in pleasure. If you only want to spend time in this nice way with someone who loves you, just come to our place of heavenly joy on Saturday.
Unforgettable sensations guaranteed! We are going to make you blissfully happy and fulfil all of your whims and whishes
R.S.V.P.*
*Give us all the details about hour of your coming and your expectation (we will try to not dissapoint you)"
Top answer
This sounds quite sexual - like they are being invited to a *** club or something - is that intentional?
- This sounds quite sexual - like they are being invited to a *** club or something - is that intentional?
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This sounds quite sexual - like they are being invited to a *** club or something - is that intentional?
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but it should be something like that 0
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