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hi there this is amit,r day i met with my friend manish at railway statation. since we met after a long time so chated for hours.

KrisBlueNZ · Accepted Answer

Anonymousr day i met with my friend manish at railway statation. since we met after a long time so chated for hours.

The beginning of the sentence is missing. I think it probably starts with "The other day ..."
Spelling errors: I (not 'i'), Manish (it's a name, so it should have a capital letter) and CHATTED.
MET WITH is formal - "We MET WITH the other board members". MET (no WITH) is better in an informal context.
AT railway station - should be AT THE railway station.
You have to use THE, A, THIS, or some similar word, to say WHICH railway station you're talking about. You're talking about a SPECIFIC railway station, one that is implied by context (probably the closest railway station, the one you normally go to), so you say THE railway station.
The last sentence is problematic. I would rephrase it to "We hadn't seen each other IN (or FOR) a long time, SO WE chatted for hours". This is compact and clear.

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