Plz check my grammar!!!

0'I went to the bank to make an enquiry. They told me that I can ask my uncle to send me the money by bank transfer.' 02br
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00Please remember that 'I' is capitalized, Hemantchavan. 0-

0 I went to the bank to enquire about transferring money from my uncles account to mine. 0-

0 Dear Mr.Micawber 02br
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00Could you please explain which one is correct? 02br
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00They told me that I can....... (or) 02br
00They told me that I could..... 02br
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0 Both are fine here, S. If you do some searching you'll find miles of thread on reported speech. 0-

0 i have wrotten my exam which two subjects before. i hope that i passed in two subjects excepted with two subjects. i have one more to write my exam on 17th may. 0-

0I hope so too, Hemantchavan. 0-

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001).I am nudging with any girls. 02br
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002). I am asking to my friend that he can nudge with her. if he nudges with her,u will have to become cool 02br
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003). I am angry because he is always nudging and teasing with me. 02br
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00I am not familiar with such meanings for 'nudge' as #s 1 and 2. 02br
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003). I am angry because he is always nudging and teasing with me. OK 02br
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001).She adopted her baby in Delhi. 02br
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002). She adopted her baby from an orphanage. 02

0 Thank you for checked my grammar. 02br
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00With Best Wishes, 02br
00Hemant 0-

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00Sub: Requesting for get the money for loan. 02br
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00Dear Respected Sir/Madam, 02br
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00I am Hemant Chavan. I am studying in Diploma in C