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BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

0Many of your errors are not so much grammar as apparently being too hasty.02br
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001) Check your capitalization. I is capitalized, the first word of a sentence is capitalized, and when I starts the sentence, it has twice the number of reasons to be capitalized.02br
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002) I have two younger [blank] and one sister. Presumably this was to be "brothers" but (in your hurry?) you omitted the word.02br
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003) You need to pay more attention to plurals. For example, "one of the best family in the world." This should be families.02br
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004) Do no refer to people as "it." If you don't know the person's ***, you can say "he or she" or even the singular "they."02br
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00Please read through your essay again and make the obvious corrections, and then repost. 0-

Ghai_prince13 · Answer

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001.1. Imagine, that you live in one room with foreign The student/student during training on a language course. It/it is interested in your family traditions:02br
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00We always celebrate together such as New Year, the 801sup^00th02sup00 of March, Easter, Christmas especially Diwali. Diwali is the festival of lights. People shoot off firework in park all over the India. Street are lit up houses are decorated and painted a new. Diwali is also the beginning of the New Year according to the Hindu calendar and it is like New Year in India. In festival my mother cooks 7 item of food which includes sweets. Sweets are a major constituent in Indian festival cuisine. We usually go outside on Friday because it’s my father holiday or we get together and have dinner and we talk about our week how its send. On Sunday we watch some movies and Tv programme. And come together after a long time. We always celebrated festival outside New Year, with our uncles and aunts and other guest sand how big is your family? What are the characters of your family? Do help each other. What are specific food are includes in your festivals?00 0-

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BarbaraPA · Answer

You made only ONE of the changes I told you about. Make a real effort at the others.

Don't expect me to use my time when you are not willing to use yours.

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