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I choose activity number 1 :You can probably imagine a different kind of school in the future. Describe what you think school will be like a hundred years from nowMy answer :I see in my mind "Zalman Aran" school a hundred years from now :A big site in the internet www.zalman-aran.co.il that all the pupils come into him every morning in 8 O'clock and start the school day.I see the teachers… Kind of computer robots that ask you a programming questions that the school moderator gave them.I think it will be very cool to learn in this school because no one can scream on you no one can write a latter to your parents and all that staff.In my future school you won't meet any new friends you won't see peoples you just have to sit on a cheer and in front of you screen.Although it could be very fun like I said before I think that it's not good for the children and the schools in our age are batter!and if you can add something by your head it will be great to!Sorry that i sent this topic 2 times

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

Hi. for a start you have lots of spelling errors. You need to check the spelling of words I have highlighted in blue. Other errors in pink.

I see in my mind "Zalman Aran" school a hundred years from now :

A big site in the internet www.zalman-aran.co.il that all the pupils come into him every morning in 8 O'clock and start the school day.

I see the teachers… Kind of computer robots that ask you a programming questions that the school moderator gave them.

I think it will be very cool to learn in this school because no one can scream on you no one can write a latter to your parents and all that staff.

In my future school you won't meet any new friends you won't see peoples you just have to sit on a cheer and in front of you screen.

Although it could be very fun like I said before I think that it's not good for the children and the schools in our age are batter!

Anonymous · Answer

ShaikatzI choose activity number 1 :

You can probably imagine a different kind of school in the future. Describe what you think school will be like a hundred years from now

My answer :

I see in my mind "Zalman Aran" school a hundred years from now :

A big site in the internet www.zalman-aran.co.il that all the pupils come into him every morning in 8 O'clock and start the school day.

I see the teachers… Kind of computer robots that ask you a programming questions that the school moderator gave them.

I think it will be very cool to learn in this school because no one can scream on you no one can write a latter to your parents and all that staff.

In my future school you won't meet any new friends you won't see peoples you just have to sit on a cheer and in front of you screen.

Although it could be very fun like I said before I think that it's not good for the children and the schools in our age are batter!

and if you can add something by your head it will be great to!

Sorry that i sent this topic 2 times

Anonymous · Answer

Don’t breathe and work hard

I don’t understand how my days start and finish. My days always

start at seven o’clock in the morning when I get up and have a shower.

Then, I go downstairs and have a quick breakfast with my friends. I usually have toast and glass of milk, but I never have bacon and eggs. After kfast, I go to school by my bicycle. Inspite of the raining weather, I drive my bike too fast. I nearly have an accident.I stay at school from half past eight until three o’clock in the afternoon. After school,I always do my homework from five o’clock to half past six or sometimes nine o’clock .Then, we all have a dinner together. After dinner, I often watch TV for an hour.And then I read books about electronic and adventure.I always go to bed before eleven o’clock. After such a busy day, I usually feel sleepy and ready for comfortable bed!

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