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Walker Percy points out in the loss of the creature that what we have experienced is formed by others’ perception that has already made of. As Percy analyzes, it can be a way of losing authentic experience, but every tour has each value depending on one’s perspective. In fact, the most important thing in a travel is that a sightseer is to enjoy every single of moments. As Percy illustrates in terms of symbolic complex, assume that there was one tour guy visits a famous monument with a huge expectation. After looking at a beautiful post card, He was disappointed by actual view of that are dissimilar from travel magazines were shown. The actual view was worse than his expectation. It can be throwing away his precious time . Others say that it was not even authentic experience as Percy emphasizes, but people don’t know why he has been to. Every sightseer visit to the place but each of them has different perspective to enjoy the travel.

Foremost, everyone has different perspective of a tour. Percy points out that if it had a certain value P for cardenas, the same value P may be transmitted to any number of sightseers. It refers that there is a difference between the first explorer and a regular sightseer who has been the place where the first explorer found. However, they have a different perspective of the tour. The choice of the first explorer was adventure and the sightseer visited the place with information. Although there is no the authentic experience, the sightseer is able to recognize more than the first explorer notices. He can expand a range of thought, instead of shouting just ‘beautiful’. Sightseer appreciates a subject in a tour as much as they know about. It means that they see in a different way because their quantity and quality of knowledge are different. Assume that fine art student and a child who doesn’t know anything about fine arts visits to museum of fine arts. A student who has fine arts major got into the museum of Fine Arts. As she walked into, she was surprised by exterior and interior of the museum and was amazed by all kinds of paintings; a sense of colors and touch that masters expressed on a panel. Moreover, each piece reminds her of things that she has learned from the lecture. She had a chance to appreciate how to master went through. One the other hand, a child who doesn’t know about fine arts started to beg his mom to get out of the museum, as only few times goes by the museum. He could notice how beautiful it is as if the first explorer found grand canyon and shouted “Beautiful”, but he was not able to identify the history of a painting or the detailed interpret of art piece. In his point of view, there is nothing better than free calendar pictures. Looking at the piece, he might think of playing a ground with friends. Knowing something is a significant role that explains the reason why they are being “the place”

Seconds, a memory about the place recalls something in a different perspective. Someone's reminiscences are things that they remember from the past, and which they talk or write about. According to English dictionary, Reminiscence means that is the process of remembering these things and talking or writing about them. It gives them a smile on the face suddenly or devouring with their sadness memory. Thinking of the thing that was happening, its emotions that have had in the place are coming back to their mind. However, each of people has different feelings even if they spend a time at a same place. All memories are priced by various values on each person’s emotion. Assume that all members of Tom’ family visited to his grandmother’s house to see all family and relatives in Kansas. In the house, Tom’s dad, Thomas, had a good time with their parents playing chess. His mom, Catherin, was busy to cook a turkey for all families and relatives. Her son, Tom, 6 years-old, spent a lot time with his relatives and played with a calf on a ranch. Even though it is the fact that all members of tom’s family mostly enjoyed at the grandmother’s house, each members recall spending the day in a different way. On the way back home, tom’s missed his parents with filial affection. Of course Catherin will miss them as well, but she was tired of cooking and all chores that had to do so that she desired not to go there for a while. Tom had a lot of fun with relatives so he begged his mom to go back grandmother’s house. As the example, a memory is estimated by one’s feeling that goes through. It is a criterion of decision that how valuable the place was.

Human beings are a sort of animals which live along with a memory. We are taken the great bliss from the God among animals. Human being is the only creature that can walk on two, think on a head, and create something with a hand; therefore, I believe that we can go travel as well. A travel is a privilege of that only human being can do it. The function of a tour is significant to get away from distress, to solve out our curiosity and to satisfy intellectual interest. No matter where we go if we satisfy the purpose of tour, feel and learn something that is not able to learn from a text book. it would be what we need for a tour.