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Plz can someone proof read my essay
Hi i need someone to proof read my essay, this is only part of it but i woeld really find it ussefel if u could read it thanx
Sparkleshark is a play about a group stereotypical characters who act out a play to get out of a sticky situation. Through the play, they come to understand and accept each other and create a friendship.
The play that the children make up is a fairytale; I think it is unbelievable that they would make up a fairytale as they are around fifteen years old. I think if the play they made were more realistic then it would make it more believable as it would suit their age group better.
Nevertheless, the characters make up for this; some of them have quite interesting backgrounds. For example, Carol seems at first to be just a copycat, but during their play, she reveals how she feels about Natasha, the girl she copies. “You made me a frog!” Carol is telling Natasha, who is a witch in the play—which also suggests how carol feels about her—that because she copies Natasha she is not a nice person and Carol is blaming her for it.
Sparkleshark is a play about a group stereotypical characters who act out a play to get out of a sticky situation. Through the play, they come to understand and accept each other and create a friendship.
The play that the children make up is a fairytale; I think it is unbelievable that they would make up a fairytale as they are around fifteen years old. I think if the play they made were more realistic then it would make it more believable as it would suit their age group better.
Nevertheless, the characters make up for this; some of them have quite interesting backgrounds. For example, Carol seems at first to be just a copycat, but during their play, she reveals how she feels about Natasha, the girl she copies. “You made me a frog!” Carol is telling Natasha, who is a witch in the play—which also suggests how carol feels about her—that because she copies Natasha she is not a nice person and Carol is blaming her for it.
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Sparkleshark is a play about a group of stereotypical characters who act out a play to get out of a sticky situation. Through the play, they come to understand and accept each other and create a friendship. ) make up is a fairytale; I think it is unbelievable that they would make up a fairytale as they are around fifteen years old.
- Sparkleshark is a play about a group of stereotypical characters who act out a play to get out of a sticky situation.
- Through the play, they come to understand and accept each other and create a friendship.
- ) make up is a fairytale; I think it is unbelievable that they would make up a fairytale as they are around fifteen years old.
- I think if the play they made were more realistic then it would be make it more believable as it would suit their age group better.
- Nevertheless, the characters make up for this; some of them have quite interesting backgrounds.
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Sparkleshark is a play about a group of stereotypical characters who act out a play to get out of a sticky situation. Through the play, they come to understand and accept each other and create a friendship. (only one friendship developed among all of them?)
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