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The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

The line charts illustrate the average monthly amount that British parents spent on their children's sports and the number of children who joined in football, athletics, and swimming between 2008 and 2014.

Overall, the money spent by British parents on their children's sports and the number of children who took part in football, athletics and swimming had an upward trend.

In 2008, £20 is spent on children's sports. After 2 years, the average monthly amount that British parents spent on their children's sports increased to £25. In 2012, it had a rise of approximately £30. In 2014, about £32 is paid out for children's sports.

Football was the most popular sport in three different sports which had about 8 million children to participate in 2008. In 2008, athletics had the lowest number of children to take part in, about 1 million children. From 2008 to 2014, athletics increased gradually by approximately 4 millions children. As the same time, swimming and football went up. Swimming increased at 4 million children. Football remained stable at approximately 8 million children between 2008 and 2010. From 2010 to 2014, football had a growth, at 9 million children.