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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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pls tell me which sentence is wrong then i'll improve it

My school is like my second home because I need to go to school to work about Sport’s day during winter break. It’s really bored but also fun. My responsibilities are the head of Capture the Flag sport and one of Pink boom cheer. My hobbies are hobbies are listening English songs and play the social networks such as Facebook twitter and Instagram. The future I would like to get into Thammasat University and work at UN but moreover I may study Law.

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Hi, The simplest thing is if I rewrite it, and you think about my edits. Ask about any you do not understand. My school is like my second home because I need to go there to work on Sports day during winter break.

— Clive

  • Hi, The simplest thing is if I rewrite it, and you think about my edits.
  • Ask about any you do not understand.
  • My school is like my second home because I need to go there to work on Sports day during winter break.
  • It’s really boring but also fun.
  • <<<< How can it be both?
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Hi,

The simplest thing is if I rewrite it, and you think about my edits. Ask about any you do not understand.

My school is like my second home because I need to go there to work on Sports day during winter break. It’s really
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My school is like my second home because I need to go to school to work about Sport’s day during winter break. It’s really bored but also fun. My responsibilities are the head of Capture the Flag sport and one of Pink boom cheer. My hobbies are hobbies are listening English songs and play the social networks such as Facebook twitter and Instagram. The future I would like to get into Thammasat Uni
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