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Ronieldeguzman Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

pls tell me if this one is correct

I will go to Pangasinan to attend my sister's wedding. Likewise, to enjoy the opportunity to have bonding with my family.
  

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It's too wordy. English is easier if you simplify: I will go to Pangasinan to attend my sister's wedding and bond with my family.

— Mister Micawber

  • It's too wordy.
  • English is easier if you simplify: I will go to Pangasinan to attend my sister's wedding and bond with my family.
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It's too wordy. English is easier if you simplify:

I will go to Pangasinan to attend my sister's wedding and bond with my family.
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how about this one....

I will go to Pangasinan to bond with my daughter,i have not seen for a long time.
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Rather overkill.

I will go to Pangasinan to see my daughter, whom I have not seen for a long time.
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