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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
pls someone to check my letter and tell me mistakes i have exam tommorow
DEAR MR SMIT
I am writing to ask for more information about your holiday camp.I am interested in your offer but i need some details.
Firstly i wonder what accommodation is suitable.Could you please tell me about the sort of conditions on the holiday.
I would be grateful if you could tell me more information about health and accident insurance about is it safe at all.
Secondly could you please tell me about baggage.Is there any weight limit.Also I want to know about hotel romms are they double or single.
Finally i wonder is it all right if i bring my dog with me ?
Send me more details about the price.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Elena Ivanova.
I am writing to ask for more information about your holiday camp.I am interested in your offer but i need some details.
Firstly i wonder what accommodation is suitable.Could you please tell me about the sort of conditions on the holiday.
I would be grateful if you could tell me more information about health and accident insurance about is it safe at all.
Secondly could you please tell me about baggage.Is there any weight limit.Also I want to know about hotel romms are they double or single.
Finally i wonder is it all right if i bring my dog with me ?
Send me more details about the price.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Elena Ivanova.
Top answer
Hi Anon, Work on your word order when you want to ask a question and don't forget the capital "I", also on the selection of the words: Finally , I wonder whether/if it is all right if I/to bring my dog with me ? Secondly , could you please tell me about baggage weight limit? / Secondly, is there any limitation on the baggage weight?
- Hi Anon, Work on your word order when you want to ask a question and don't forget the capital "I", also on the selection of the words: Finally , I wonder whether/if it is all right if I/to bring my dog with me ?
- Secondly , could you please tell me about baggage weight limit?
- / Secondly, is there any limitation on the baggage weight?
- Also I want to know about hotel rooms if they are double or single.
- / I'd like to know if the rooms are double or single.
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Hi Anon,
Work on your word order when you want to ask a question and don't forget the capital "I", also on the selection of the words:
Finally, I wonder whether/if it is all right if I/to bring my dog with me ?
Secondly
Work on your word order when you want to ask a question and don't forget the capital "I", also on the selection of the words:
Finally, I wonder whether/if it is all right if I/to bring my dog with me ?
Secondly
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DEAR MR SMIT
I am writing to ask for more information about your holiday camp.I am interested in your offer but i need some details.
Firstly i wonder what accommodation is suitable.Could you please tell me about the sort of conditions on the holiday.
I would be grateful if you could tell me more information about health and accident insurance about is it safe at all.
Secondly cou
I am writing to ask for more information about your holiday camp.I am interested in your offer but i need some details.
Firstly i wonder what accommodation is suitable.Could you please tell me about the sort of conditions on the holiday.
I would be grateful if you could tell me more information about health and accident insurance about is it safe at all.
Secondly cou
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