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Hungg Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Pls review my essay.part 2

Nowadays, there are various school problems with children and also adults, but bullying is the most crucial problem which the government and citizens are always dealt with it. The following essay will demonstrate further details of the cause with a few solutions

Due to the development of society and technology, more mobile devices coming out with various disadvantages. Being a result of it, lots of films about violence are produced. More and more children have addicted to that kind of film, In addition, children mimic it and manipulate it at schools. However, some kinds of bullies just bully for fun, some fame and reputation at academies. Nevertheless, maybe bullying also comes from the environment around them. Some of the bullies may not be taught well enough at home and school maybe because of their attitude at school so then the teacher or the parents sick of teaching them

In contrast, there are always solutions. In my opinion, children should be cared for well enough at schools also homes. The government should make a period to teach the student how to self-defense against it or how to dealt with it in the long further future. However, in some cases that we can't deal with it, the best solution is to yell for support because the more people support us, the less consequence. After that, we have to present it to the police officer or parents, teacher to be handled it.

To sum up, students at school with children at home should be cared well and avoid watching lots of violence scene

  
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