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Mitsuo23 Posted 15 years ago
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Pls rephrase this:

Hi,

Please rephrase the parts I underlined. so confusing.

"Centralize and simplify the creation, management and delivery of pre-designed, online software demonstrations and software evaluations.

This private clouds solution makes this possible for employees, customers and partners through true self-service. "

Thank you,
M
  

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Hi, This private clouds solution makes this possibl e Using private clouds allows people to do this for employees, customers and partners t hrough true self-service. " <<< It's a rather odd phrase. People can do it by themselves.

— Clive

  • Hi, This private clouds solution makes this possibl e Using private clouds allows people to do this for employees, customers and partners t hrough true self-service.
  • " <<< It's a rather odd phrase.
  • People can do it by themselves.
  • They don't need someone else's help.
  • Clive
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Hi,
This private clouds solution makes this possible Using private clouds allows people to do this

for employees, customers and partners

through true self-service. " <<< It's a rather odd phrase. People can do it by themselves.
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Thank you, Clive! Big help!
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