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Mizanur Posted 11 years ago
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Pls. rectify this sentence

Please rectify this sentence: I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background would help me to achieve my future career goal; which is, ultimately, to work for Non-governmental Organizations or Multilateral Organizations those are presently operating in Country A like UNCHR, UNDP, and Oxfam etc.
  

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I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background is the pathway to / will lead to would help me to achieve my future career goal which is , ultimately , to work for a n on-governmental o rganization or m ultilateral o rganization such as those that are presently operating in Senegal Country A — UNCHR, UNDP, and Oxfam. Usually a career goal is in a subject area, eg. administrator, fund raiser, medical professional, economist, or engineer.

  • I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background is the pathway to / will lead to would help me to achieve my future career goal which is , ultimately , to work for a n on-governmental o rganization or m ultilateral o rganization such as those that are presently operating in Senegal Country A — UNCHR, UNDP, and Oxfam.
  • Usually a career goal is in a subject area, eg.
  • administrator, fund raiser, medical professional, economist, or engineer.
  • NGOs hire all of these kinds of professionals.
  • So saying you only want to work for an NGO doesn't say much at all.
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I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background is the pathway to / will lead to would help me to achieve my future career goal which is, ultimately, to work for a non-governmental organization or multilateral organization such as those that are presently operating in Senegal Country A

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