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Sand-dumes Posted 18 years ago
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she moves floating rose petals away from the waterbowl placed in front of him. There is her reflection in the water. but suddenly she observes his clutching firm claws and draws herself away quickly.

pls pls correct the follwing sentences. or rephrase it if it better then.
  

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She clears away the rose petals floating n the water bowl in front of him and can see her reflection in the water. Suddenly she see his -- what? Is he a cat?

  • She clears away the rose petals floating n the water bowl in front of him and can see her reflection in the water.
  • Suddenly she see his -- what?
  • Is he a cat?
  • A werewolf?
  • why does he have clutching claws?
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She clears away the rose petals floating n the water bowl in front of him and can see her reflection in the water.

Suddenly she see his -- what? Is he a cat? A werewolf? why does he have clutching claws? -- and draws away quickly.
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no .. just its taunt for a man who wanted to grasp her....

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