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Nikoer30127 Posted 15 years ago
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Pls proofread this paragraph!Thanks!
"The Shallow", which is written by the author, has claimed : Comparing to the era of reading hardcover/reading hardcover era of consideration and imigination is found easily from " Internet", seems to distract the train of our thought and disqualify our reading, moreover, learning becomes superficial. The author thinks that the internet world makes the sensation and comprehension of our brains becone shallow.
please revise it!! Thank you!
please revise it!! Thank you!
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I have underlined some problems and struck out useless words. ) and structure, I cannot understand much of it, frankly. Please post your revised paragraph.
- I have underlined some problems and struck out useless words.
- ) and structure, I cannot understand much of it, frankly.
- Please post your revised paragraph.
- "The Shallow", which is written by the author, has claimed : Comparing to the era of reading books /reading hardcover era of consideration and imigination is found ( ?
- ) easily from " Internet", se ems to distract the train of our thought and disqualify ( ?
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I have underlined some problems and struck out useless words. Because of poor word choice (?) and structure, I cannot understand much of it, frankly. Please post your revised paragraph.
"The Shallow", which is written by the author, has claimed: Comparing to the era of reading books /reading hardcover era of consideration and imiginat
"The Shallow",
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It's just a random translation from a lanuage to another language.
I want to say" The author who wrote this book called " The shallow", has said that comparing to the era of reading paper mold books of consideration and imagination, information is found (?) easily from " Internet", seems to distract the train of our thought and disqualify (?
I want to say" The author who wrote this book called " The shallow", has said that comparing to the era of reading paper mold books of consideration and imagination, information is found (?) easily from " Internet", seems to distract the train of our thought and disqualify (?
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