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Mitsuo23 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Pls proofread this: 80 words.
Hi all,
Could you please proofread the paragraph below?
Ok, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style like Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angels and of staying at hotels like the ones you just described, though practically I've never come across scenes like yours, so that I could relate myself to the stories.
Thank you for your help in advance,
M
Could you please proofread the paragraph below?
Ok, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style like Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angels and of staying at hotels like the ones you just described, though practically I've never come across scenes like yours, so that I could relate myself to the stories.
Thank you for your help in advance,
M
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I have undelined some problem areas: Ok, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style like Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angels and of staying at hotels like the ones you just described, though practically I've never come across scenes like yours, so that I could relate myself to the stories.
- I have undelined some problem areas: Ok, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them.
- I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style like Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers.
- And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angels and of staying at hotels like the ones you just described, though practically I've never come across scenes like yours, so that I could relate myself to the stories.
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I have undelined some problem areas:
Ok, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style like Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angels and of stayin
Ok, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style like Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angels and of stayin
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Thanks for the reply,
let me give it one more try.
Okay, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style such as those of Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angeles and of staying at
let me give it one more try.
Okay, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style such as those of Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. And another reason should be coming from my experience of spending some time in Los Angeles and of staying at
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Okay/ OK, they are good stories, and I certainly enjoyed reading them. I think that the style is one of the reasons I like the stories: the minimalist style of Raymond Carver, who's one of my favorite writers. I also enjoyed them from my experience of spending some time in Los Angeles and of staying at hotels like the ones you just described, though practically I've never com
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