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Vincent Ding Posted 20 years ago
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pls proofread it for me

After graduation from college, I want to join a consulting company which provides consultancy services regarding financial matters.

I'd like you to proofread the above sentence with particular reference to the blue words.

thank you.
  

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Hi Vincent, After graduation from college, I want to join a consulting company which provides consultancy services regarding financial matters. This is OK, except that I would omit one or other of the two words to avoid repetition. Best wishes, Clive

— Clive

  • Hi Vincent, After graduation from college, I want to join a consulting company which provides consultancy services regarding financial matters.
  • This is OK, except that I would omit one or other of the two words to avoid repetition.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Vincent,

After graduation from college, I want to join a consulting company which provides consultancy services regarding financial matters.

This is OK, except that I would omit one or other of the two words to avoid repetition.

Best wishes, Clive
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