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Sweety10 Posted 20 years ago
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I wish I was gutsy enough to let him know I loved him. But I fear his refusal. Does this sound right? Thanks.
  

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I wish I was gutsy enough to let him know I loved him. But I fear his refusal. I guess you need I love him , if that's still valid.

  • I wish I was gutsy enough to let him know I loved him.
  • But I fear his refusal.
  • I guess you need I love him , if that's still valid.
  • The rest seems OK to me.
  • If you want to be formal, replace was with were .
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I wish I was gutsy enough to let him know I loved him. But I fear his refusal.

I guess you need I love him, if that's still valid. The rest seems OK to me.

If you want to be formal, replace was with were.
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I wish I were gutsy enough to let him know I love him. But I fear his refusal?/

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