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Toshio Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Pls I need help for my letter of application
Hello everybody, could you proofread my letter of application please?
I have to apply for a job as travel coordinator.
Here are the skills company’s looking for: Experience, to be IT literate, good communication skills, be self-motivated, work to deadlines.
To whom it may concern
With reference to your advertisement inserted in the “xxxxxxx” of November 5th,
I should like to apply for the position of Business travel coordinator.
As you will see from my enclosed Curriculum Vitae et studiorum, I graduated from the University of xxxxx in 2000 with a degree in Tourism Studies. During my following apprenticeship, I obtained practical training in all aspects which tourism is involved in. I have been working as a European Tour Guide since 1998 for the xxxxx , which is based in . Prior to this, I worked as a travel agent as freelance during the summer season. I hold certificates in computer graphics and word-processing. Furthermore, I speak fluent French, Italian and Chinese.
I have smart appearance, I am friendly, organised and patient and I am used to working under pressure and to a deadline.
As my references show, I have been very popular with many of the clients who specifically asked for me to be their travel coordinator on tours they went on.
I believe the post you offer will give me the chance to strengthen and deepen my stock of knowledge.
I will be glad to supply you with any further information you may need and to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.
Yours faithfully
XXXXXXXXX
I have to apply for a job as travel coordinator.
Here are the skills company’s looking for: Experience, to be IT literate, good communication skills, be self-motivated, work to deadlines.
To whom it may concern
With reference to your advertisement inserted in the “xxxxxxx” of November 5th,
I should like to apply for the position of Business travel coordinator.
As you will see from my enclosed Curriculum Vitae et studiorum, I graduated from the University of xxxxx in 2000 with a degree in Tourism Studies. During my following apprenticeship, I obtained practical training in all aspects which tourism is involved in. I have been working as a European Tour Guide since 1998 for the xxxxx , which is based in . Prior to this, I worked as a travel agent as freelance during the summer season. I hold certificates in computer graphics and word-processing. Furthermore, I speak fluent French, Italian and Chinese.
I have smart appearance, I am friendly, organised and patient and I am used to working under pressure and to a deadline.
As my references show, I have been very popular with many of the clients who specifically asked for me to be their travel coordinator on tours they went on.
I believe the post you offer will give me the chance to strengthen and deepen my stock of knowledge.
I will be glad to supply you with any further information you may need and to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.
Yours faithfully
XXXXXXXXX
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Hi,
Yes, you do write very well.
I've suggested some changes.
Clive
To whom it may concern<<< Never start with this. Say 'Dear Sir or Madam,' if you don't know the person's name.
With reference to your advertisement inserted in the “***” of November 5th,
Yes, you do write very well.
I've suggested some changes.
Clive
To whom it may concern<<< Never start with this. Say 'Dear Sir or Madam,' if you don't know the person's name.
With reference to your advertisement inserted in the “***” of November 5th,
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Thank you very very much Clive for your advice.
Toshio
P.S. How can I solve this problem about loggin in here?
Thank you again!
Toshio
P.S. How can I solve this problem about loggin in here?
Thank you again!
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Sometimes I can't login with my user and password.
I hope it's a temporary problem, perhaps related only to my account.
I find this forum very useful, so I hope I'll have again your advice in future for other questions:)
I hope it's a temporary problem, perhaps related only to my account.
I find this forum very useful, so I hope I'll have again your advice in future for other questions:)
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Hi,
It's just a temporary problem arising from our move to a new server.
Clive
It's just a temporary problem arising from our move to a new server.
Clive
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ToshioHello everybody, could you proofread my letter of application please?I have to apply for a job as travel coordinator.Here are the skills company’s looking for: Experience, to be IT literate, good communication skills, be self-motivated, work to deadlines. To whom it may concern With reference to your advertisement inserted in the “***” of November 5th,I should lik
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