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Jiangyueming Posted 13 years ago
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Pls helpe me correct three sentences. Thank you!

Some profit-oriented merchants would add poisonous chemicals in the milk in order to increase the volume of protein. In 2009, a famous milk brand, at least in my country, was reported that the milk was added melamine. If people ingest more than a certain amount of melamine, it will lead to death.
  

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Some profit-oriented merchants would add poisonous chemicals to the milk in order to increase the volume of protein. In 2009, a famous milk brand, at least in my country, was reported to have added melamine to their milk . If people ingest more than a certain amount of melamine, it will lead to death.

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  • Some profit-oriented merchants would add poisonous chemicals to the milk in order to increase the volume of protein.
  • In 2009, a famous milk brand, at least in my country, was reported to have added melamine to their milk .
  • If people ingest more than a certain amount of melamine, it will lead to death.
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Some profit-oriented merchants would add poisonous chemicals to the milk in order to increase the volume of protein. In 2009, a famous milk brand, at least in my country, was reported to have added melamine to their milk. If people ingest more than a certain amount of melamine, it will lead
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