Pls help verify my US-english

Dear all,

I would like to have a good US-english text of the following. Can you help pls. I appriciate and many thanks. Phi(L).

"Open letter to Harry from concerned owners/tenants.

Hello Benn, Hi all,

Harry, some poeple appriciate the job you are trying to do. However, pls dont overact. It will have an averse effect and you will loose (lost) credibility. At the meeting, the 10+ minutes you were talking about the lock on the swimming pool door was an example as such. Everybody felt you wanted to fight and steal the show. When you tried to get the crowd behind you, all neglected you and you had NO support at all. Think about that. If you want to do something, do it the good way and forget your ego. If you cannot, stop with doing anything for our condo.

Owners have the right to know the truth. We hear different things from different folks and the situation is escalating. You know what is going on and, in stead talking nonsens, you better inform the people about the FACTS! In the meeting, Jeff showed some enveloppes not sent to the foreigner owners. He told us the domestic people from the committee did not wanted to invite the foreigners at the meeting. Knowing that, he putted a sign at the entrance-door to inform all people about that, as it is normal to have a meeting with ALL people invited. The domestic comittee members say the opposite. Jeff toke away the enveloppes and did not sent them........ Who is right in this? This is very very serious and nobody talks about it. We want to know who the liars are........ Harry, you can bring clarity in this. We all know you are an old committee member and still have friends/contacts there. However, the situation becomes very dangerous. We expect you to take responsability in the name of all and for the wellbeing of our condo-complex.

We also noticed police and immigration is checking all and everything now. It looks like a witch-hunt is going on for the foreigners after the old building manager stated angry at the meeting "all foreigners out". Police and immigration will stay for 1 week. This has never happened before. They question people and ask people questions about OTHER people. THIS IS EXTREME DELICATE. Many bad rumours going around. We all know that, if the old committee will come back, it would be a desaster for the building and the people living here.

Take your responsability Harry and inform correct, to the point. Pls dont forget to tell the whole truth. Not a part of it, or your truth only.

Thanks in advance Harry.

A few concerned owners/tenants."