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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Pls help to correct my sentence, tq

Jim,



I’m referring to your payment for reservation change due to revised flight dates (rotational leave) to accommodate site visit to Tokyo. To support with this claim, I would required your rotational leave form, to avoid ABC Co's invoice had been returned.



Jill,



I’ve here two invoices with me which had been returned from client due to insufficient supporting documents. I will send you a separate email with more details information.
  

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Hi, Jim, I’m referring to your payment for reservation change due to revised flight dates (rotational leave) to accommodate site visit to Tokyo. To support with this claim, I would required your rotational leave form, to avoid ABC Co's invoice had been returned. This is almost impossible to understand.

  • Hi, Jim, I’m referring to your payment for reservation change due to revised flight dates (rotational leave) to accommodate site visit to Tokyo.
  • To support with this claim, I would required your rotational leave form, to avoid ABC Co's invoice had been returned.
  • This is almost impossible to understand.
  • You need to reword it.
  • Here's my guess at your meaning, although I might be wrong.
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Hi,

Jim,

I’m referring to your payment for reservation change due to revised flight dates (rotational leave) to accommodate site visit to Tokyo. To support with this claim, I would required your rotational leave form, to avoid ABC Co's invoice had been returned.

This is almost impossible to understand. You need to reword it. Here's my guess at your meaning, although I m

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