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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Pls help to check grammar for my email

I'm writing an email to my supplier. Pls help to check grammar for email content below. Many thanks.

"After communicating with key dealers, there's been a change of plan, we will be having dinner with key dealers on 30th July. And then, the upcountry trip shall be started on 31st July til 1st Aug, so you can be here in night of 29th or morning of 30th July."
  

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After communicating with the key dealers, we have changed out plans. We will be having dinner with them on July 30th, and the upcountry trip will be July 31st–August 1st, so you can arrive on the evening of the 29th or the morning of the 30th.

  • After communicating with the key dealers, we have changed out plans.
  • We will be having dinner with them on July 30th, and the upcountry trip will be July 31st–August 1st, so you can arrive on the evening of the 29th or the morning of the 30th.
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After communicating with the key dealers, we have changed out plans. We will be having dinner with them on July 30th, and the upcountry trip will be July 31st–August 1st, so you can arrive on the evening of the 29th or the morning of the 30th.

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