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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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pls help my english asap / Thanks

0(This is my last day in office ,I had to write bye bye not everybody pls someone help me to write something -I am so nervous to write something - Many Thanks )02br
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01font00Dear All .02font02br
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01font00Thank you very much for the present and lovely flowers. I had fab time Ubisoft last 3 .5 years . But time move and do different thing .02font02br
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02font 02br 02br 01font 02font 02br 02br 02br 01font 00Thank you very much for the present and lovely flowers. 5 years . 02font 02br 02br 01font 00I am going to miss you all ,it was wonderful experience to work with such nice people 02font 02br 02br 01font 00I am wishing you all and Ubisoft all best for future 02font 02br 02br 01font 02font 02br 02br 02br 00Dear All, 02br 02br 02br 00Thank you very much for the gift and the lovely flowers.

  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 02font 02br 02br 02br 01font 00Thank you very much for the present and lovely flowers.
  • 5 years .
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00I am going to miss you all ,it was wonderful experience to work with such nice people 02font 02br 02br 01font 00I am wishing you all and Ubisoft all best for future 02font 02br 02br 01font 02font 02br 02br 02br 00Dear All, 02br 02br 02br 00Thank you very much for the gift and the lovely flowers.
  • I had great time working with you at Ubisoft for the last three-plus years.
  • I'm going to miss you all -- it was wonderful experience to work with such nice people!
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1font00Dear All .02font02br
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0 Hi Barbara02br
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00Just to confirm: Is 'the' required?02br
00I wish you and Ubisoft all (the) best for the future. 0-
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0 Yes, "all the best for the future". 0-
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0They are all good, with the exception of the last "all". That last sentence should be written "I wish you and Ubisoft all the best..." because 'you' implies 'all of you', and you use "all" again almost immediately. Looking at it again, I think I'd also leave out the "all" further up where you say "working with you all" for the same reason.02br
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0 To the contrary, I'm most grateful! I copied and pasted the original and those slipped my notice - thank you! (And yes, I thought there were too many "all"s as well.) 0-

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