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Moli Posted 17 years ago
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My daughter went to Suzhou for camping these days.I suppose I am relaxed and do what I want to do,but I feel pretty lonely in fact.
At 5 pm every day,I receive the phone from my daugher,who tell me something interesting happen in the school.She opens the door and waits for me when I am near to the home.After supper,we both take a walk outside.She is always holding the controller at watching TV.She says,”Mom,I love you,have a good dream.”before go to bed.
But I didn’t have her call yesterday afternoon.In the evening,my husband read the newspaper and I went to upstairs to watch TV,I felt bored.Suddenly,the telephone was ringing,oh,my daughter said that she had a good time with her friends in Suzhou.
Dear baby,you are back tomorrow.The first thing I want to do is to kiss you!
At 5 pm every day,I receive the phone from my daugher,who tell me something interesting happen in the school.She opens the door and waits for me when I am near to the home.After supper,we both take a walk outside.She is always holding the controller at watching TV.She says,”Mom,I love you,have a good dream.”before go to bed.
But I didn’t have her call yesterday afternoon.In the evening,my husband read the newspaper and I went to upstairs to watch TV,I felt bored.Suddenly,the telephone was ringing,oh,my daughter said that she had a good time with her friends in Suzhou.
Dear baby,you are back tomorrow.The first thing I want to do is to kiss you!
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moli My daughter recently went to Suzhou for camping these days on a camping trip . I suppose I am should be relaxed and do doing what I want to do, but in fact I feel pretty lonely . in fact.
- moli My daughter recently went to Suzhou for camping these days on a camping trip .
- I suppose I am should be relaxed and do doing what I want to do, but in fact I feel pretty lonely .
- in fact.
- At 5 pm every day, I receive the / a phone call from my daugher, who tell me telling me that something interesting happen has happened in the school.
- When she is here at home with me, and sees me approaching the house, she She opens the door and waits for me .
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moliMy daughter recently went to Suzhoufor camping these dayson a camping trip. I suppose Iamshould be relaxed anddodoing what I want to do, bu
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