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Torndhal Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Pls help me with motivation letter
I'd like to ask anybody who's more experienced in english than I am for a little request. Do you think you could look at my motivation letter for erasmus program, please?
If you could look at it and tell me what you think about it, it would be just wonderful. I used conditional instead of future tense, but i dont know if this is the way it should be. One more thing i am completely unsure is commas.
Thank you for any help. Here it is:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to express my interest in participating in international internship as an ERASMUS student. In my application, I have decided to apply for xxx University, xxx University and xxx University.
I am broadly interested in studying the state interference as a public law institution into the sphere of private law. In my application, I have decided intentionally for universities in countries such as xxx or xxx, where the state influence has traditionally been strong in the private sphere.
Therefore I have chosen the subject of state-owned entreprise also for my graduation thesis. I expect from the international internship to help me collecting material for my thesis.
The oportunity of studying abroad would give me a chance not only to study what I am interested in but also to compare study of xxx legal regulations with the foreign law. In this manner it would widely extend my skills and it would provide me an outlook on xxx through a European perspective. I am also very interested in working in groups and in concentrating on one subject during short periods which are so typical for xxx education system. Different approaches to the xxx as well as creative and cosmopolite environment at the foreign university could start a new chapter in my life.
Every foreign year-time internship is a wonderful life experience. A year-time internship in countries considered to be on top regarding education system would broaden my horizon and contribute enormously to my future career plans.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours faithfully,
xxx
If you could look at it and tell me what you think about it, it would be just wonderful. I used conditional instead of future tense, but i dont know if this is the way it should be. One more thing i am completely unsure is commas.
Thank you for any help. Here it is:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to express my interest in participating in international internship as an ERASMUS student. In my application, I have decided to apply for xxx University, xxx University and xxx University.
I am broadly interested in studying the state interference as a public law institution into the sphere of private law. In my application, I have decided intentionally for universities in countries such as xxx or xxx, where the state influence has traditionally been strong in the private sphere.
Therefore I have chosen the subject of state-owned entreprise also for my graduation thesis. I expect from the international internship to help me collecting material for my thesis.
The oportunity of studying abroad would give me a chance not only to study what I am interested in but also to compare study of xxx legal regulations with the foreign law. In this manner it would widely extend my skills and it would provide me an outlook on xxx through a European perspective. I am also very interested in working in groups and in concentrating on one subject during short periods which are so typical for xxx education system. Different approaches to the xxx as well as creative and cosmopolite environment at the foreign university could start a new chapter in my life.
Every foreign year-time internship is a wonderful life experience. A year-time internship in countries considered to be on top regarding education system would broaden my horizon and contribute enormously to my future career plans.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours faithfully,
xxx
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