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Dear All,I already applied for an position and I also invited for an interview .but I  havenot got any news regarding my application.2 months later my interviewing I  went directly to the prof.XXX .she told me they will inform soon .unfortunately it is 4 months up to now , I am getting concern about it, this time I want to send her message rather than going her office. Many thanksShirin................................................................................................................................................................Dear Prof XXAs I haven't received any news regarding my application so far. I  would be grateful if you could inform me whether you have decided or not.I  hope I won't make any convenience for you ( I apologize for any inconvenience may cause  by my enquiry).I am looking forward to receiving  your response and to be given the opportunity to join your lab. Best regardsShirin.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

I've made some changes.

Good luck with this, Clive

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Dear Prof ***

As I haven't received yet received any news regarding my application for the position of ***, I would be grateful if you could inform me whether you have made any decision. I apologize for any inconvenience that my enquiry may cause.

I am looking forward to receiving your response and hope that I will be given the opportunity to join your lab.

Best regards

Shirin (put your full name)

Anonymous · Answer

Hi Clive,

Thank you very much for your comment.

Regards,

Shirin

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